Memoir of high school

I was so used to summer and sleeping in until 11. But on September 8th I was awake with a huge building in front of me at about 7 in the morning. I couldn’t believe that summer was already over. I felt like that a couple weeks ago I had ended 8th grade and I was very tired. I walked into Stevenson and was stunned by the amount of people. I wasn’t ready to start school but I had 9½ months left ahead of me until I could see summer break again but I thought that it was bound to happen sooner or later.

I had no idea that there was a courtyard that you could walk through .Because of that I was late to one of my classes on the first day. I had walked around the corner instead of walking through the courtyard and got caught in a big group of people that took me a while to get out of so I was a little bit late. I probably could’ve made it if I would’ve gone through the courtyard. Then after class I figured out about the courtyard so I couldn’t be late get late to that class again.

Later in the day I had another little situation with the courtyard. I found my way to the courtyard and worked my way outside. But the door in front of me had closed and I just continued walking. I went to go to open the door but I couldn’t. I had thought that maybe the door was hard to open or that I was really weak. But I realized it was locked. I turned around and tried to open the other door and that was locked too. I thought that I was locked outside, but then somebody saw me outside and they opened the door for me. I was very lucky that somebody saw me and opened the door for me. I thanked them and just got to class on time.
I changed a lot of things in my paper. I changed my lead slightly and made it a little longer. I took less off of being late to second hour because I didn’t know that the courtyard was there and added more to the time when I got locked out. I thought that I added more detail to mine. I used paragraphs this time. I also think I did a good job of developing my paper. I also think that I made a point to my paper